Literacy - Metaphor Poems

This week we have been writing our own metaphor poems, here are some of them

 

The Wind

 

The wind is a wolf

Rushing fiercely through the woods,

Pouncing on its prey at night.

 

The wind is a ghost

Creeping around quiet as quiet,

Invisible as air,

Looking in a spell book looking for spells to cast on people.

 

The wind is a burglar

Stealing from house to house,

Creeping around each room,

Taking jewellery and taking other precious things.

 

The wind is a fast car

Crashing and turning,

Racing around,

Crashing and zooming.

 

By Megan Haswell and Ruby Nixson

 

 

The Wind

 

The wind is a wolf staring at its prey

rushing fiercely through the woods

pouncing on it at night

roaring fiercely through the streets.

 

The wind is a ghost

flying through the air

throwing things.

 

The ferrari is zooming around

everywhere on the streets.

 

The night is quiet like no other

creeping like a burglar.

 

By Lucy W

 

 

The wind

 

The wind is a wolf

Roaring fiercely through the streets,

Pouncing on its prey at night.

The wind howls in the moonlight.

The ghost is like an invisible white sheet

and the ghost is very quiet.

Some ghosts can have magical powers.

A fast car zooms past on the roads

Cars crash and race

they go zoom zoom.

A burglar will steal anything

In his way and he is very creepy.

 

By Izzy and Georgia

 

 

The wind

 

The wind is wolf, rushing through the

trees like a fox, with terrifying fangs.

 

The wind is a Ferrari spider, 13 meters

long, engine roaring like a madman

roaring at people passing.

 

The wind is a ghost, wandering

through the woods, walking through

the trees.

 

The wind is a burglar, stealing through

 a garden and not waking the flowers.

 

The wind is a spy, spying on people

asleep, smashing their windows wide

open, throwing the furniture on the floor.

 

By Casey Jennet

 

New Hardwick Hall

 

Recently we visited Hardwick Hall. Here are some pieces of work about the visit to Hardwick hall and the childrens views about the day. these pieces are about the new hardwick hall:

 

Hardwick hall

 

Hardwick hall was built more than 400 years ago by Elizabeth countess of Shrewsbury in the 1590's in Derbyshire.

Inside there are many rooms that are ginormouse. The third floor has more windows than the others. Windows were only for the rich and wealthy. The most important rooms were the Green Velvet room, the gallery and the Great hall.

 

By Joe Darbyshire

 

 

Hardwick Hall

 

Hardwick hall was built in the 1590's during the tudor times. The lasy who owned Hardwick Hall was called Elizabeth of Shrewsbury known as bess of Hardwick.

Bess's house was mainly made of stone and glass. Glass windows in those days were very expensive and it showed that she was very wealthy. (She was the second wealthiest Woman in the Country but Queen Elizabeth was the richest.) There were more glass panes on the most important floor.

 

By Kelsey

 

Old Hardwick Hall

 

These pieces of work written by the children are about the Old Hardwick Hall: